Dear Red Rose! Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran

Dear Red Rose!



Your grace,
vibrancy your hues
the fragrance of your
honey drips
inviting lure your petal lips!

I love you dearly,
Do you hear Red Rose?

How could I dislike you,
leave forlorn?
for those thorns
under your leaves alone!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 09 December 2009

For those thorns under your leaves alone.... very nice and meaningful closing. thanks for sharing.

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Mandara Pookal 09 December 2009

When colours beautify an individual's personality, the aura and mystic of the perfumed mind plays havoc on the romantic physiology that raves and rants for approval and attention. Perhaps a tandem struck and a response withheld but all the same the feeling leaves one more beautiful to the eyes, mind and heart of the other. Your acceptance of all that one is made up of spells your generosity. As an onlooker, I envy your stance. mandara

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Ramin Chaman 10 December 2009

Dear Kesav Thanks for your nice comment.and you believe me that you have a sincere heart too. but about your nice poem...your writes always are full of youthful also your words are poetic.. and i love you for that a heart of red rose... Ramin

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, aryaindia 10 December 2009

You play with the words leaves that leaves the reader quizzical and puzzled for to unwittingly leave forlorn one who seemingly captures the mind and heart is the greatest sad tale of the human heart. Well written - arya

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Catrina Heart 10 December 2009

short yet cleverly structured...remarkable closing! ! !

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Briana Doni 06 January 2010

wow! this poem is so romantic and just makes me fill up with happiness. something about it. just makes me all warm and happy! i love it.10

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Winnie Angel 31 December 2009

Red roses are queen of flowers and queen of our hearts tooo! ..Enchante..Winnie

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bye bye... bye bye 22 December 2009

When I read your poem I take it as you are a bit sarcastic? But no other comments refer to that, so I guess I may misunderstand you. You are so aware of this 'beauty dilemma': You can´t get a rose if you don´t accept the thorns. But - if the rose would leave you, you wouldn´t miss the thorns. A very romantic AND realistic poem - at the same time! Amazing paradox!

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Nizamettin Esen Haymanali 20 December 2009

Inspirational, intense and excellent verses very well penned.

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Meggie Gultiano 19 December 2009

Lovely lines..this is beautiful, Kesav

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