Dusk could use a little brightness from dawn.
Almost nothing ought to be in the dark.
Yelling is not similar to a yawn.
Listen to the music of a day's lark.
Indeed, this thing doesn't make any sense.
Gray night skies are only being lightened.
Having someone to call me 'tensely dense, '
Today's sun should just really be heightened.
Yelling is not similar to yawn...great lines. May I invite you to read my poem Life: a token free roller-coaster.
This is a fantastic poem based on an excellent theme, the flow is like a wind, I like the poem...please read mine ‘’I want to die’’
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A really wonderful poem, really like it. A great write.