Daydreaming Poem by Laurena Pamela Willetts

Daydreaming

Rating: 5.0


Fluffy white clouds way up high
a silver dart jets through the sky
reclining in my garden, lost in thought
I dream, I wonder what shores it sought

Some faraway place exotic in flavour
some distant shores whose spices we savour
silvery beaches with white capped waves lapping
tall upright palms bowing and swaying

Maybe I’m wrong and its city bound
dusty, noisy plagued with sound
overcrowded, busy teeming with life
all seeking to bring stress and strife

Maybe it’s off to extremes of the earth
Inhospitable regions suffering a dearth
frozen landscapes, spreading desert sands
high mountain ranges majestic and grand

Maybe it’s not heading anywhere
maybe it’s homeward bound
with everyone on board in agreement
how good it will feel to kiss home ground

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valerie Dohren 29 March 2012

This is a lovely poem, makes me wish I was jetting off somewhere! !

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Anjali Sinha 01 March 2009

Lovely imagery certainly a good write --10 anjali (do read mine Recession of love)

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Greenwolfe 1962 29 January 2009

I am a rhythm and rhyme poet so I love to read rhymes. These are nicely done. The concept of the poem is simple but presented very well. I also like this classic structure for poems. GW62

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Ency Bearis 28 January 2009

Awesome poem..a wonderful dream...and nice vivid write..10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 January 2009

Beautiful daydreaming of far away lands ends up to kiss home ground. Thematic imagery.......10/10. Regards Naseer

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Laurena Pamela Willetts

Laurena Pamela Willetts

south wales u.k.
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