life can be lonely
even with a partner
when that partner no longer cares
merely sits and stares
what went wrong
when we were young
we promised it would be forever
now there is nobody there
no love, no fun, no laughter
no warm embrace, no kind face,
everything's an effort, everything's a pain
unless its' for his own self gain
the children have their own lives
thats how it should be
old age shared together
is how i thought it would be
who is this stranger that sits beside me
what changed us into different people
time, life, experience, age,
life is just another page
can we ever go back
to how we really were
or better to accept its gone
and live for tomorrow for today is done
it'z reminding me in someone that used to be my soul twin.. iam likin it alot i swear..
Ain't it the truth, being taken for granted. A well conceived word picture. Best, Jerry
A Clear vision of Human cycle, the rough and smooth space we walked. the suffer and lonliness are unveiled.thanks for sharing the great work, New Year Best Wishes.
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Well written - life is lonely when there is no acknowledgement or caring - 10