Captain Cur

Rookie - 293 Points (England)

Dawn's Rebellious Incitation


I am born in praise, bold galactic pulsing rhythms,
my spirits charge uphold the stellar spheres positions.
Singing songs of the Universal One's beginning
guarding the fragile breeze that keep the planets spinning.

I flew to earth in dawn's rebellious incitation
felled by mirth from his beauteous exhortations
spun from dreams now impoverished from his vision
forfeiting established place, to never be forgiven.

I was seduced by her sunlit oceans brimming;
her sculptured clouds and her deep sea creatures swimming,
her vaults of green then their massive colors thinning,
to be one of flesh and blood and know the thrill of living.

Her stormy voice as the white lightening heralds thunder;
her willful skies of wind shorn savage wonder,
mountain falls that pierce the veils that cover
the peacefulness her orbit brings as she softly slumbers,

her caves and springs that course her inner boundaries,
her finger lakes that stroke the artwork of her foundries,
I walk on air through the archway of her bands;
I kiss my ocean lovers as they wed the virgin sands
and kneel in exultation as I palm my changing hands,
I am a human woman; I feel the touch of man.

Submitted: Sunday, March 17, 2013
Edited: Sunday, March 17, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem heralds 'The Road to Perdition' series of fallen angels
The Road to Perdition
The Road to Perdition, Michael, Verse II
The Road to Perdition, Quilted Wings, Verse III
Dawn's Rebellious Incitation

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  • Freshman - 2,381 Points Diane Hine (3/20/2013 4:05:00 AM)

    The adventures and misfortunes of a curious angel who was tempted to visit Earth concludes here with a fabulous explanation of what lured her down. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 134 Points Danny Draper (3/17/2013 5:04:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem. Woman, Gaia, giver of love and life, a mother, a partner to humanity a beauteous rarity in a lonely existence. (Report) Reply

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