kyle potter

Dark Dark Girl - Poem by kyle potter

Dark girl so filled with strife
Dark Dark girl she'll take your life
Dark girl stay for a while
Dark Dark girl she makes me smile
Dark girl she shows no fear
Dark Dark girl is always near
Dark girl wont see her cry
Dark Dark girl just wants to die

But Dark girl lives in the dark
so you dont see her painfull mark

Dark Dark girl may never know
just how much the light can show

Comments about Dark Dark Girl by kyle potter

  • Rookie - 23 Points Umar Kabir (4/3/2015 6:22:00 PM)

    I absolutely love the last line (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 23 Points Umar Kabir (4/3/2015 6:21:00 PM)

    i absolutely love the final line (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points melanie stinnett (1/12/2015 1:31:00 AM)

    I love this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Crystal Martin (8/28/2013 7:00:00 PM)

    i can definetly relate im like the dark girl but there is no light for me good poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dragon Crenshaw (11/28/2012 2:51:00 PM)


  • Rookie Jessee Bennett (11/2/2012 12:19:00 PM)

    I loved this poem. Its one of the ones that is simpal but elagant. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Savano Istork (10/3/2012 6:35:00 PM)

    I loved this poem. It's one of my favorite poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Aya Kishiko (9/1/2011 4:27:00 PM)

    It should be LIGHT girl.. negative poems are all over in here - it's good to express your feelings, but isn't it tiring? ..^_^..pfufufu.try to smile and enjoy life once in a while. fighting! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cleide Tatyana Almeida (6/3/2010 1:48:00 PM)

    One word; well actually I need to write over twenty characters apparently. Now that I've done that, here's the word: AWESOME! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kyle Potter (4/26/2010 8:33:00 PM)

    thank you, i had a lot of fun writing it about my friend that hated the poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mackenzy Edmonds (4/26/2010 8:01:00 PM)

    its so amazing i luv it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jamie Stone (12/16/2009 11:55:00 PM)

    I love this, there is so much feeling in it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Disturbed angel in a straight jacket (10/23/2009 12:03:00 AM)

    i like it nice work ++10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gold Fish (10/12/2009 10:56:00 AM)

    A dark poem brought into the light. I enjoyed this poem about the dark dark girl. It was quite clever, witty, and a nice read I might add. Sorrow, Sadness, Hopelessness, Suicide, Death, Happiness, Acceptance, Pain – you encompass this and much more in this short, intense little poem of yours. You’ve done a good job Kyle. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 12, 2009

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