Dark Angel Poem by Arianne Owens
Dark Angel
I look in to your eyes,
I see God,
I see Satan.
angels now consume you,
while demons left their mark.
Bad thoughts,
good plans.
Your past is corrupt
your future is bright.
They talk about who you were,
I see who you are.
Dark past, promising future.
Angels and demons fight.
You're my dark angel.
I love the comparison. You need to watch out for grammatical errors in spelling though. A nice piece.
Hmm... I love the way you described so clearly the battle within the person, the change... it was really well written! :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 2:08:35 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A clever poem but as Muneerah writes one or two spelling mistakes ruin it a little. Nevertheless I understand it's meaning. Keep on writing Arianne as the talent is in there.