Danse Francaise Poem by Georgiana Hilderman

Danse Francaise

Rating: 5.0


Well into dusk, war rages this night
Many a soldier has gone to the fight
Many a soldier has died this night

Well into dusk and the ladies of France
With Gentlemen do the three-quarter dance
Far from the fight, they life not the lance

People divided, a country in two
The smiles of the weary are hopeful, but few
Forget the present, be watchful for new

Well after dusk, today's fight is done
Now will the soldiers drop the raised gun
The battle is o'er but still far from won

Well after dusk, the party has stopped
Fading away are the fireworks that popped
The music is silent, finished the fun

People divided, a country in two
The smiles of the weary are hopeful, but few
Forget the present, be watchful for new

Saturday, April 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dance,soldier,war
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
France during the French revolution was very split between the rich aristocracy and the poor peasants.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Billsborough 30 April 2016

It reminds me of a passage from lord Byron's Childe Harold, the great ball before the Battle of Waterloo held in Brussels. Actually it was held in a big barn! Your poem brings out this disassociation in War. The french people endured great suffering, not just in Paris, but in places like La Vendee which Victor Hugo covers in his novel Quatre Vignt Treize. Your poem is very good, emphasising the future uncertainty. Tom Billsborough

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Thank you, Tom, for your interesting and encouraging critiques! The rating did go through.

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