Dancing In Las Vegas Poem by Louise Marie DelSanto

Dancing In Las Vegas

Rating: 4.5


One day my sister appears
at an Art fair
near the Scituate farmland

When I see her she is sitting
in a wheelchair,
her body wrapped in a shawl.

Swollen knees with brown
leather braces. She
whispers, I cant dance now.

She shows me an old picture
of the two of us, we were
standing near Santa Claus
downtown in the fifties.

'When the Winter comes,
I think of you
and your birthday in December, '
my sister began.

She told me she had
been meaning to call me.
Her dog died. Her daughter
moved out.

You look the same, she
tells me, that same round face
and doll hair. She laughs.

You should have seen me
dancing in Vegas, she brags,
The ballroom light dashing
against the wall, the music
blasting me deaf.

My sister reaches down
to rub her knees
Age is cruel, she says
Bones were never meant to last.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charles Chaim Wax 10 November 2005

a poem dwelling at the edge of sadness but not quite so a sister's love how precious what a blessing and this is a fine poem

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Kee Thampi 11 February 2007

the good empathy in poetry makes a differ in write She shows me an old picture of the two of us, we were standing near Santa Claus downtown in the fifties. 'When the Winter comes, I think of you and your birthday in December, ' my sister began.

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Bill Smith 12 November 2005

at the risk of sounding boring, liked this

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Kelly Allen Vinal 11 November 2005

A wonderful and powerful piece!

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Cj Heck 10 November 2005

Very poignant and real. Nice work, Louise. Warmest regards, CJ

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Simon Whild 10 November 2005

What a fantastic and moving poem. Short lines and relatively unadorned language accentuate the emotional impact of the subject matter.

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