oh Divine!
Please listen the prayer of little fool
Cant you make the summer bit cool
Oh divine!
Cant you make winters little warm
and bid rains to fall only in farm
Oh Divine!
Cant you give us the wings to fly
And fix back of head with pair of eyes
Oh Divine!
Cant you give three Sundays per week
and free bodyguards to humble and meek
Oh Divine!
Cant you give us free food and home
So there is no work save to roam
Oh Divine!
Cant you give us two brains
So we dont have these fancies vain
ANJALI SINHA
17-12-2008
Food for thought. Your imagination is limitless! ! Pleasure to read. Thanks.
a prayer that sounds so innocent and childlike. The smooth flowing and unpretentious verse make for enjoyable reading.
Sure ur prayer will be answered by the almighty......... keep it up......... 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Funny..I'm reminded of a tamil film song which asks for two hearts or minds...one to laugh and one to cry...nice write10
Simple in its profundity and profound in its simplicity. Well done my freind! 10+++
I too love writing poems.you have so many, which ones would like for me to read? I want to add so many of mine to this site, but I am to slow at typing. Thank you for your comment on my poem (OLD GLORY) I have revised it.
WHAT A PRETTY SWEET AND GREAT POEM IS THIS ONE...MELODIOUS, PERFECTLY DONE. RICH IDEA AND POETIC FLOW...ALL THESE ARE THE BEAUTIES OF YOUR THIS POEM..I REALLY LIKED IT VERY MUCH SPECIALLY THIS STANZA, , , , Oh Divine! Cant you give us two brains So we dont have these fancies vain
Beautiful idea of two brains! A creative perceptive thought. 10+++
Gud morning! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Morning prayers will always be answeered......... surprised na......... seeing me dis tym.......... ye............hehehe..........hehehe...........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
What a charming poem, keep it up.