Cut Away Poem by Heart of Ice Die Die Die

Cut Away

Rating: 5.0


I want to cut.
So bad.
Make this feeling go away.
But my doing so
I would cut away
my friend.
And besides that
I'm just too tired
to push down hard enough.
But then again,
she's mad.
And I might be able
to sum up the strength
for one more cut.
Would it be worth it?
Maybe.
What will the outcome be?
Unknown.
Will she have her excuse?
Yes.
Should I?
No.
Do I want to?
Yes,
Do I care what others think?
Not really.
Will I?
Maybe.


Oct.-25-09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 14 November 2009

owuld...this word is would? double read..... the poem was well express..ouch, ouch lol

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Patrick A. Martin 07 November 2009

This is really a worrying poem Rach. Maybe it's time to get help- I love yer

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