Blood Poem by Heart of Ice Die Die Die

Blood

Rating: 5.0


I opened my heart to you
And you stabbed it through with a knife
and you said: I love you forever, please understand.
The last words I heard as I took in my dying breath,
Uttered from your lips.
The last thing I saw, with my now glazed over eyes,
Was you
standing over me with the knife now bloody
with our blood.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eyan Desir 01 October 2009

This sounds painful... but good write

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Broken Heart 23 July 2009

koool! ! awesome! ! great

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Isaac Maliya 15 July 2009

The poem of relationships and their mood -swinging! I am spell-bound with it! Good one, Rachelle. Highly rated poem!

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~*Random Nightmare*~ 02 July 2009

Didnt' you wirte this the same day we trashed my jeans? ? Lol! Anyways! I loved it!

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