Cupcake Poem by Nassy Fesharaki

Cupcake

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Cupcake

Though it was a muffin
I call it a cupcake
For namesake.

Recipe's contents were:
Flour with milk and egg, sugar
For rising used sodium carbonate.

Upper part of it was toque blanche
Congruent the paper at bottom
Resembled Mini-skirt
Tightly worn.

Of muffin
Did not get any taste
Sweetness was Judy's, only her!

I found milk and honey of heaven
Promised as goody in Bible
But via piece of cake.

This Judy is sweet
Smiles filled with kindness
As did mine in old days.

Friday, December 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sweet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joe Stimpson 05 February 2017

This poem doesn't make very much sense.

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Nassy Fesharaki 05 February 2017

Thank you...I will read it and see where it must be corrected...deleted...I wish you had, instead of a simple rejection, recommended some productive words.

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