Crying Inside And No One To Care Poem by TANIA HERNANDEZ

Crying Inside And No One To Care

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WHEN I CRY I'M USUALLY ALONE
WHEN I CRY I HAVE NO ONE TO CARE
WHEN I CRY THERE IS NO ONE THERE TO HOLD ME
WHEN I CRY THERE IS NO HELPING HAND
WHEN I CRY I AM LONGING SOMEONE TO LOVE ME
WHEN I CRY I'M USUALLY ALONE
SO IF YOU SEE SOME ONE CRYING GIVE A HELPING HAND AND SHOW CARING EYES CUZ WHEN YOU CRY ALONE IT IS VERY SAD.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Samael Wolf 13 December 2006

Simply beautiful.

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corey baker 13 December 2006

Kind of akward, and spellcheck was apparently mistreated, but I like the repetitive useage of 'when I cry', it really gives emphasis to the emotion of sadness and not just the act of crying.

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