Crimson Tears Poem by Aiden Florence

Crimson Tears

Rating: 5.0


I would never want to see you cry
Your tears are so beautiful
But nothing compared to that smile
You’d present in front of everyone else.

In front of my eyes
All you can do is cry
Your tears are too precious
For my soul to encounter all the time

I feel like breaking myself
Whenever your sadness comes to my mind
‘Why can’t I make you happy’
For once, why can’t I just see you smile
For me, for every attempt I made to be here with you

I keep telling you
‘Wait for me at the end’
When I can never see you again

Just think about it Juliana
What else could’ve I said to you that night
To keep myself
From having to see you dropp tears in your cry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lilly Mandrell 19 June 2008

I like it. I think it could take a little tweeking in a few virces, but I really like it, and thats jusy my opinion. Lilly

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Casey Gauthier 12 June 2008

I enjoy it. and I don't think you're losing your touch. :)

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Serenity Prayer 11 June 2008

aww. its sad, but cute. i understand what you mean. its hard to explain, but you explained it very well. excellent job. i absolutly love it.

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