Crimson, Razor's, Depression, And Suicide Poem by Jade's Pain
Crimson, Razor's, Depression, And Suicide
Crimson:
The color of the liquid that now flows from her wrist. She
turned to her trusty 'friend' that's never failed her.
Razor:
This is her 'friend', the only one she can ever rely on. She
puts the trust in it's hands now, whether to go deep beneath
her skin or shallow above her pulsing vein.
Depression:
This is why she turned to the razor. The feeling of being
low and unworthy of any source. She stays locked away in
her dark pit of hell spending quality time with her 'friend'.
Suicide:
This is the results of spending time with your 'friend' just
to watch the crimson liquid flow out.
Sounds like fun....NOT! ! !
...I kinda like it! Really sad though... ~A Little Blue Bird~
What a stimulating poem NOT! I don't know about Christ's redemption saving one from suicide, nor does anyone else, I venture to say, but simply emptying raw emotion in lines does not constitute a poem! A piece, perhaps, of self pity and an effort to warn others, I don't know!
I really enjoyed this piece. It's so sad but anyone who has been through a cutting experience knows this feeling. To anyone out there who may be dealing with this I would just like to say that this is not the best or only way to deal. The redemption of Christ can save you from anything, just as He has done for me! ~Lacey~
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/3/2024 1:53:55 PM # 1.0.0.1119
It sounds so familiar, like the reasons of my poems.. I like it... Sad though it may be.