Fay Slimm

Rookie - 12 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Creating Dilemma - Poem by Fay Slimm

Nostalgia recalled,
..........................young nubile mayhem,
Distraught, unhappy
..............................and often confused,
Seemed yoked to chaos,
.......................... yet she remembered
The fun, - how it felt
..................................to control a loser.

With butterfly grace,
................................ tied gregariously,
She plied her looseness
................... with much honest charm.
Amusing herself,
............................... she tried various
Means, playing Russian Roulette,
........................................ and arming
Her chances, she dived
............................. in headfirst, never
Aware such risk taken
.............................. creates dilemma.

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  • Rookie Carol Gall (9/24/2009 4:22:00 AM)

    good write fay yes a dilema 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 421 Points Ency Bearis (9/24/2009 3:40:00 AM)

    nice write...well pictured false dichotomy....a great creative verses.....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 24, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, October 9, 2009


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