Cosmic Conciousness Poem by ritty patnaik

Cosmic Conciousness

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a star,
before sleeping,
before budding itself
goes off...in oblivion
of distant dreams!

moon!
throws beams,
of passionate love,
from its shapely
pale glow
and smiles.
thus elixer is born....

sun!
giver of energy
warmth and well being,
embraces man and nature
in its rays of hope for mankind,
showers light and prosperity.

sea...
in its vastness,
holds, in its deapth,
many secrets unknown,
and a angst of power,
over mans helplessness!

life...
dwindles
day by day.
no matter how much you walk,
the road is unending.
half way, the graveyard
stares at you,
welcomingly.

cosmos...
holding galaxies
cosmic conciousness,
a dropp enough,
which is the quintessence
for existence!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 27 August 2009

Ritty, this poem lives, it breathes it radiates itself to explain the meaning of our life. I loved it and will take it with me to read again and again. Bob

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Milica Franchi De Luri 19 August 2009

A star, moon, sun, sea, life, cosmos...........you covered the main ingredients that are contributing towards existence of all things- they are the power grater then ourselves....... well done Ritty, i enjoyed reading it...........Thank you! Milica

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Ejaz Khan 19 August 2009

Cosmic consciousness must be tremendous, beyond our comprehension. A deep write!

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