! Constructive Criticism! Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Imperfection is the way

describes what is life each day.

Its true meaning is comprehend fully

after everything fell apart painfully.

Having failed truly we can say

'existence gives no perfect day',

proves mistakes come our way.


Imperfection is an infinite thing,

sorrows and pain it does bring.

Its essence is misunderstand,

as something we can't withstand.

If each individual aspires for perfection,

thinking positive may hold as consolation;

and believing there's always a solution.


Perfection seems inconceivable

but practice makes it achievable.

Those who act optimistic

and refrain being pessimistic,

only then perfection becomes real

and honest work inspires a better deal


by accepting criticism as a goodwill.