Marvin Brato Sr

Freshman - 629 Points (March 2,1960 / Davao City, Philippines)

(why Sex Before Marriage?) - Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Marriage sanctifies sex,
sex consummates marriage.
But why prefer sex before marriage,
is there one or more reasons to consider?

Maybe its still men's quest,
a priority test for him as the best.
So that the mating could be marked,
as something worth experience to take.

The best part in sex is sensuality,
that each mate could get from sex.
The manner a partner performs well,
is much desired by almost hot lovers.

Science could enhance state of sexuality,
cosmetology can recreate the transformation.
By sex before marriage a person can discern,
is the smart way to test the true lover's affinity.

Sexual compatibility excites much pleasure,
Aside from love it is where both are in tune.
And to know what degree of zest it can set,
through sex before marriage is the gauge.

Comments about (why Sex Before Marriage?) by Marvin Brato Sr

  • Gold Star - 7,550 Points Charity Nduhiu (8/19/2015 11:43:00 PM)

    Brato, I totally agree with you sex consummates marriage. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 4,941 Points Points Of View (6/17/2015 6:27:00 AM)

    I agree with Ms. Naida. Lovemaking is the best word than sex..
    It's a choice if either before or after married...if you choose before married accept whatever the circumstances accept without regret.. (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 4,941 Points Points Of View (6/17/2015 6:30:00 AM)


  • Veteran Poet - 1,692 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (5/30/2015 4:51:00 AM)

    I like the poem, and I get the point.
    Maybe let us use lovemaking instead of sex, for we do it with the ones we love right?
    But whatever preference each of us choose, it is our decision.
    Apart from this argument, and the others'- your poem is good. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,269 Points Ramesh Rai (10/19/2014 12:39:00 AM)

    Though this poem got maximum votes but only four comment.You have made your best effort to analyze the subject. In my opinion sex is a satisfaction whereas marriage is an institution a bond to live together. Marriage is held twice or more in a life. Though I m a single woman man. but sex should not be clubbed with marriage. But sex before marriage should be avoided for a better life partner. Thanks for choosing good idea.But how a poet can satisfy his/her life partner when totally inclined towards poetry.? (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 4,941 Points Points Of View (6/17/2015 6:29:00 AM)

    I agree with you Sir...well said

  • Rookie Michael Akioyame (3/7/2010 11:55:00 AM)

    Though contradicting, i think sex before or after marriage is a question of perception and religious belief.
    I want sex now or never! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luna Deava (3/17/2009 5:58:00 PM)

    I hate this. Sex should definatly be saved for marriage. It may 'feel cool' but what about STDs and pregnancy? Do you support the murder of unborn babies? If you love someone you should show it by WAITING. It's the true test of love. (Report) Reply


    soory it was a bit boring (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tai Chi Italy (9/29/2008 5:51:00 AM)

    I agree marvin, and when I read your title I thought, an why not sex before marrage? lol it is foolhardy imo to go into such a permanent relationship as marriage before trying out the good bits! lol Chastity in marriage is a big yes yes for me, but that is because I married for love. Smiling at you, Tai (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 29, 2008

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