Concern Poem by Jann Aquarius

Concern

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in this period of my life,
love is not my concern.
trust and acceptance echoes in my brain.
listen!
when you see my face,
i know,
suffocation set in
i will never look at you again

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 March 2010

when you see my face, i know, suffocation set in i will never look at you again....................... WHEN THING TURN ONFAVOURABLY ON YOU, U WOULD LOVE IT FROM THE START... BUT IT IS VERY FINE AND I HAVE GOOD FEELING....10 READ MINE.. LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT

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shakequill usher 22 March 2010

words coming from smothered patience.

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