Completely Broken Poem by Silentpoet Grl

Completely Broken

Rating: 5.0


shaking hands
so scared of whats happening
sick to the stomach
excruciating pain
a feeling of hate unlike any other
numbness takes over
so angry and hurt
want to be left alone
ashamed and broken
dont try to fix me
these are my pieces
meant to be shattered,
left completely broken.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 19 May 2012

True. We can only put outselves together, but sometimes the pieces don't seem to fit. Strong poem.

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Jonny Brackney 25 January 2012

yes, this is good....

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Kara Towe 26 December 2011

Powerful! No body can fix anybody. I can't stand it when they try, like they know my pain, my life, my heart, my mind. I'm not a bug to examine, I'm not a numbered robot on a recall line. I hear you loud and clear, couldn't agree with you more. Rock on!

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Kimberly Picazo 26 October 2011

Very well written ^_^

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Dave Walker 26 October 2011

Like this. Really like your style of writing. Great write.

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