My Mind Poem by Silentpoet Grl
My Mind
my mind is like a loaded gun
pressure is building, ticking
a final act pushes the limit
breaking me even further down
tormented, gnashing thoughts
loudly battle the dark demons
secrets caged, locked tightly in
searching, aching for any relief,
grasping at holding it together
trigger pulled creating new chaos
beautiful pain sends demons fleeing,
blood spilling as thoughts escape
silenced, my mind finds release.
the mind is the only god given weapon to man.........nice one silent girl
Wow! How much I would love to be in your mind and vividly watch this excited show! I really know the feeling when I wrote' A Mind Escape'...10+++ This is a fantastic write well penned! Thank you for sharing! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! ...
Very deep write, well done! Relief is in living your best, loving your self. Not putting up with anyone trespassing against you in life. Don't allow anyone to control you, always think good of yourself, that's really the best revenge. Sincerely, Kara
When one releases pain in words, one releases some of the pain inside the soul...please keep writing and releasing the demons with your words...blessings...de
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Wow! this is beautiful Silentpoet.....!