Come Young Pirates, Drifting Shrouds Of Virginal Clouds Above The Island Flow, (37) Poem by Captain Cur

Come Young Pirates, Drifting Shrouds Of Virginal Clouds Above The Island Flow, (37)

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At first sight, a gift from the light,
Tenerife peaked in snow
drifting shrouds of virginal clouds
above the island flow.
Sloping scenes of vanishing streams
melt on the valley floor,
steep uplands trek the mountain steps
that lead to Anaga's door.
Banana's bake and patiently wait
ripening in the sun
protected by skins slender and thin
bunching tight when their young.
Dates on sticks; healthy and fit,
wrinkling as they toil,
armies of boots of reaching roots
marching deep in the soil.
Fern filled dells beautifully swell
watered abundantly,
wild flowers crest on rills that stretch
surrounding tall dragon trees.
Evergreen's pride, forested high
sheltering shady coves
deep in the glen mysteries blend
where fauns and nymphs still roam!

(Gifted by legend and beauty
this isle came known to be
the jewel that adorned the necklace
of the Atlantic sea!)

The lines in parentheses were written
by the crew of the Malevolent!

Saturday, April 10, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: canary,islands,princess,love and war,pirates,story
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Come Young Pirates, is a series of adventure and descriptive sea poems. In this segment the Captain is retelling the true tale of a beautiful Princess who lived on Tenerife Island. This story was begun in previous segments. This segment centers on the beauty of Tenerife Island. Anaga is a mountain range on Tenerife. The Malevolent is the name of the Captain's spectral warship.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harley White 11 April 2021

Lush visions, delicately putting one in the picture, with elegant metric rhythms and double rhymes… a feast for the senses once again!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 April 2021

A wonderful and vivid depiction of a beautiful and one of a kind island. A well crafted write as always.

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