Colors Fade Poem by Alyssa Long

Colors Fade

Rating: 5.0


His favorite color, blue
Stains my irises.
It casts itself
Unto my once white tunic

His aura, onyx
Bleeds from my eyes,
Soiling my once pink cheeks.
It seeps into the new rings
Set deep below my eyes.

His care for me, clear;
Though he never
Made it evident.

Into the green ocean,
My flesh falls, innocent and white.
The water splashes and lashes back
Revoking my entry,

And tries to throw me back to shore with rip curls,
Suppressing my array of arms and legs.
The ocean's frothy fingers collide
Against my equally alabaster skin.

All the while, the wind blew,
And all the while, I blacked out,
And no longer were my cheeks pink.
And no longer was it clear to me
That the ocean was green
Or that the sky existed.

Rather, all was black and white.
My flesh was ashen and pasty,
Still and floating
Face down.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Surya . 15 May 2009

deeply and meaningfull.posted 10 surya

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Sam Fitts 09 May 2009

It's truly amazing, but women float face up when they drown

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Amity Quinn 08 May 2009

Wow Alyssa, this is amazing. Not exactly what I expected from you, but the surprise was half the fun. Beaufitul imagery, it kept me hooked till the very end.

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Tyler Smith 29 April 2009

Haha you were right about your poems being very dark and deathy. The imagery is great, and your ending is perfect. The flow is nice, and the diction is fantastic. The syntax could be more malleable, but overall this is amazing. I don't really understand the 'Ora', unless you mean 'aura', like the energy surrounding an object or him? But other than that this is totally awesome, I love it.

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