Colors And Promises! Poem by priyanka gyanchandani

Colors And Promises!

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and then i see in my mirror
was it beginning or the end?
or was i lonely again
i see the chapter end
i see those colors and promises shed...

In this world of two-sided people and fantasies
could not find was i wrong or right..?
just that i know was you were not there
when i need you by my side
i see those colors and promises shed..

Now that i see that i have pen and paper to mend my broken part
there you are siting and playing with another girl's heart
how can i forget that i was just an ink for you
it ended and you brought new
time stands still
and i see you walking up the hill
and then i see those moments fade
and i see those colors and promises shed!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 20 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Priyanka g. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Federico del Corazón 21 December 2011

The poem reads well, reads as of you poured yourself in it

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 21 December 2011

very nice....'..and then i see those moments fade.....and i see those colors and promises shed'....nice ending

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Ramesh Rai 21 December 2011

Really, i appreciate your endeavour, may i like to invite you to read my poems with best wishes ramesh rai rkrai100@gmail.com

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