Cold Wait. Poem by Fay Slimm

Cold Wait.

Rating: 5.0


Today the summer sun warms not my heart.
The bluest vaulted sky has no allure.
Each breath is long and merely sounds a sigh.
Time hangs a weight of iron round my mood.

To live by looking backward leaves a space.
Present moments wither with stifled hope.
This cold wait overheats my salty tears.
The summer ended when you went away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Gibson 07 August 2009

Each moment is a life time, I can feel that your apart! no other man will ever receive, . the love that's in your heart totally, its given, nevermore, to be won that stupid man has missed out! Fay Finnish this!

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Laurie Hill 06 August 2009

So very well written, so poignant that it touches the reader with its sadness.....

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Fay Slimm

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in Cornwall U.K.
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