Cold In My Feet Poem by Saulius Sirvinskas

Cold In My Feet

Rating: 5.0


Autumn has come. Cold, Wet, Sad.
My feet are cold, winds blows chilly northen winds.
Leaves are falling on my feet, I look down.
My soul cries of despair, yet my mind does not waver.

Saturday, October 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: madness,sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 24 October 2016

Autumn has come. Cold, Wet, Sad. My feet are cold, winds blows chilly northen winds. Leaves are falling on my feet, I look down. My soul cries of despair, yet my mind does not waver. - - - - - - Short, beautiful and amazingly expressive write .I agree with what Unwritten soul said When you got cold in your feet, perhaps you can warm your heart May heat will travel as the blood flows.. ''- - - - - - 10

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Unwritten Soul 23 October 2016

When you got cold in your feet, perhaps you can warm your heart May heat will travel as the blood flows.. Dont cry of despair, smile for great things to happen next There will be summer again maybe not now just later only

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Fabrizio Frosini 22 October 2016

yet, your best write posted at PH up to now is your BIO.. Biography of Saulius Sirvinskas Was born in 1995 september 13 in Lithuania city Šiauliai, Lived most of his life in new stone, small city near latvian border.Served military service for 1 year due to conscription, Spend all of his time playing video games for 10 years he almost everyday has spend his days playing for appx 12 hours a day. He finished Ramuciai gymnasium high school on 2012 his grades were low, what he lacks in academic apptitude he excels in his creativity, madness and good spirits. Most would be terrified of thoughts that goes in this little man's head, but those who seek knowledge and truth will love this man. He began writing poems on 2016-10-22 without any knowledge on them. A GREAT BIO ;) WELCOME on PH, Saulius!

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