Cold Hearted Poem by joshua reid

Cold Hearted



When your heart turns cold
it causes your soul to freeze
It spreads throughout your spirit
like a ruthless feeling disease
The walls that once were down
now stand firm and tall
Safe from hate/love, pain/joy
until your heart turns cold a baby's cry means nothing
A dead corpse is trivial
Mothers neglecting children is daily
Loneliness becomes your routine friend
Death seems like tranquility
Sleeping is never pleasant
if you even sleep at all
you forget ideas and turn off the reason
to make sure the product get sold
You don't understand how i behave
Just wait till your heart turns Cold!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katherine Ng Li Hoon 29 August 2008

Very sad but it toutches me.Keep it up!

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Tanya Stanford 18 August 2008

A sad reflection of reality. Well written.

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Yami Tenshi 17 August 2008

I love that poem.... it's very deep and explanatory. Also sad... I like that. Excellent job. ~Yams

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