Come Closer Poem by joshua reid

Come Closer

Rating: 5.0


come closer and I'll pull the trigger
dare you to ask me why my pupils are bigger
you filled my head with all this stress
come closer and you'll have to clean up my mess
i can't stand all you put me through
come closer and ill show you a side you never knew
i thought drugs would calm me down
let me turn all your smiles to a frown
my mind is moving faster than i can think
come closer and let me give you something red to drink
shot echo's through my head like a chyme
opps, i guess you got to close this time

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katherine Ng Li Hoon 29 August 2008

I am impress by this write.I enjoy read it.

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Tanya Stanford 29 August 2008

wow. Very dramatic. I felt emotion for every word written and the 'come closer' part very impactful. Good job.

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