Coddled Car Poem by Kassem Oude

Coddled Car

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At last I have my first car
Too dear like a unique son
Who comes too late, I saw far
She fills my heart with big fun

She's so nice duck with little white
Medium size and force but svelte
Fuel saving cheap parts simple quite
Easy to drive, a cozy nest

She takes home bath at sunrise
Daily receives small repair
Tiny defects make me arise
Holding her abreast a piece rare

She's grateful does not deceive
Some may think we're in romance
She's my symmetry I do believe
In my deeds with else in balance

I am obsessed by her style
No other one lures my soul
I see delight looking a while
At her stainless muffler holes.

Kassem Oude
Thursday 10 August 2017
BMW ET 30 1989

Thursday, August 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lora Colon 02 April 2019

When a man writes a poem to his car, there is certainly some affection there. You take good care of it and make it look beautiful, so you have the right to be proud of such a fine vehicle. May it bring you happiness for many more years. A delightful poem.

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Bri Edwards 29 March 2019

ok, happiness HERE i see! a love affair between a used car,1989, with muffler holes, and a man, perhaps with some age spots of his own? bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 August 2017

Congratulations! Possessing first car gives happiness in mind definitely. Sharing a poem on memory of 1989 is really interesting and amazing.10

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