Clouds Above Olympia Poem by Captain Cur

Clouds Above Olympia

Rating: 5.0


Grandest creature marble white
rearing proudly in thy time
the clouds above Olympia
thunder with thy stride;
enormous hoofs of white and grey
eyes of fiercest black,
nostrils flaring in a rage
who dares mount thy back!

Saturday, June 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: artistic work,horse,mythology
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by an ancient Greek horse sculpture.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 30 June 2018

The clouds above Olympia has given thunder but artistic work is initiated. Grandest creature, the marble white horse is rearing proudly at time.An amazing experience is wisely expressed in this brilliant and excellent poem...10

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Captain Cur 01 July 2018

Kumarmani, a most gracious comment, may your poems run wild and free with the stallions of old.

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Robert Murray Smith 30 June 2018

A beautifully crafted write.++10

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Captain Cur 01 July 2018

Robert thank you, may the gods of Olympia revel in your poetry! Those ancient gods so did like to revel and cause all sorts of mischief.

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