Sandra Feldman

Clouds - Poem by Sandra Feldman

How strange,
The clouds derange,
My peaceful day,
Intensive gray,
That will not stay,
Just floats away,
Perpetual change,
How strange.

The changing shapes,
The light that drapes,
Some shadows,
The clouds are here,
And then there gone,
Like certainly will we

Comments about Clouds by Sandra Feldman

  • Gold Star - 17,115 Points Bri Edwards (11/13/2012 7:33:00 PM)

    i like this but check out your spelling of they are/they're in last stanza. and what do you think about changing last line to like certainly we will be? thanks for sharing. bri edwards (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 975 Points Marilyn Lott (10/24/2012 5:49:00 PM)

    Very nice, Sandra. I also have a poem with the same title. I take pictures of them all the time. So amazing they are. Hugs (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 11, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, October 12, 2012

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