Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Rookie - 42 Points (4th June 1976 / Benin)

Cloud Nine - Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

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Walk with me to cloud nine
Where love inhales divine,
Where joy makes up sunshine,
Where delight sets to pine,
Where with laughter we dine,
And make our spirits fine.
High spirits more than wine
Enough to make bliss twine,
We have cause to recline
To time so yours and mine.


Comments about Cloud Nine by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (1/31/2017 11:49:00 AM)

    Superb! ! !
    Very interesting poem. I could see through this poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rajnish Manga (1/29/2017 12:06:00 AM)


    Where joy makes up sunshine,
    Where delight sets to pine,
    Well done dear poet friend. The scene captured by you has all the ingredients that make up a life worthy of celebration in a blissful atmosphere. This is now a favourite of mine. Thanks.
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  • (1/28/2017 11:05:00 PM)


    High spirits more than wine
    Enough to make bliss twine.
    Heartiest Congrats on the Poem of the Day.
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  • Bernard F. Asuncion (1/28/2017 10:26:00 PM)


    Excellent poem.... congrats on being selected...... (Report) Reply

  • Geetha Jayakumar (1/28/2017 9:51:00 PM)

    Cloud Nine
    Cloud Nine is beautiful enough to gather dews of time. Beautiful write. Congrats for member poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Christina Simmons (1/28/2017 1:39:00 PM)

    Cloud Nine:
    A beautiful, wonderful and romantic write. Congratulation for being noticed! (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (1/28/2017 11:45:00 AM)


    Short and sweet and full of love the poem gives a good feeling. Thanks for sharing and Congrats. (Report) Reply

  • Lantz Pierre (1/28/2017 10:44:00 AM)

    sometimes it gets so tryin'
    verses from the assembly line
    of the great watermelon vine.
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  • Clarence Prince (1/28/2017 9:10:00 AM)


    Walk with me to cloud nine
    Where love inhales divine
    That sounds nice, thanks for sharing!
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  • (1/28/2017 8:55:00 AM)

    Turpentine
    Oh, this smells turpentine
    And tincture benzoin
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  • Tom Allport (1/28/2017 3:43:00 AM)

    tom allport
    a nice poem of togetherness, so divine it's fine. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (1/28/2017 2:20:00 AM)

    Laughter
    Yours and mine. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (1/28/2017 1:41:00 AM)

    Cloud Nine
    This poem would have been better without rhyme. Try blank verse.

    Congratulations on poem of the day.
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  • Kim Barney (1/28/2017 1:30:00 AM)


    Congratulations, Obinna, for having this poem selected as Member Poem of the Day! (Report) Reply

  • (10/15/2009 8:34:00 PM)


    You’re true, no wine, no other intoxicant can give the bliss what Divine can give us. Beautifully expressed. (Report) Reply

  • (8/21/2009 1:46:00 PM)


    'We have cause to recline
    To time so yours and mine..'
    your poems always take to clouds, actually...thanks for sharing this Airy one :)
    Y.
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  • (5/4/2009 2:28:00 AM)


    wondeful poem..well expressed...10 (Report) Reply

  • (5/3/2009 10:38:00 AM)


    celestial wonder..elevating write (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 1, 2009



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