Charming Eyes Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Charming Eyes

Rating: 5.0


Splendour beams deep in your eyes,
Thrusting my mood red to rise.
For their shine is of the sun.
I commoved, eye you as one,
Whose eyes have transmission bright,
Within gilding me with light.

Grand with gold lit liveliness,
Posing you as a goddess.
They graced with flowered beauty,
Gardened to smile heavenly
In elevating me to fly
With love to the light blue high.

Their light tunes me fresh and whole,
Linked is mine bound to your soul.
Purity in your eyes, fine
In its zeal ever to shine,
Fuelled me spirited to know
Them with an enchanting flow.
Rose-beloved, your eyes of love
Repose dear in me a dove.

Note:
Line 4 commoved refers to caused to be excited

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 26 December 2009

Poetic sojourn on eyes…nice and eyecatching…eyes are liner lead to Love... Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Vinod Kumar 15 October 2009

Lovely treat and tribute, it is divotional and pleasent shining, thanks for shanrig,10+

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so much beauty and passion are in this poem, it I could rate this poem 1 to 10 I would give it a solid 20! great job Obinna!

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Beauty Philosophy 11 September 2009

Lovely poem....real beauty lies in the eyes because they are the mirror of the soul...and those who have a beautiful soul, their beauty will remain forever whereas those whose beauty is only physical, it will wither and age through TIME..a good message to convey. Voted 10.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 01 September 2009

I love this poem how charming eyes and oh, so bright they dazzle with delight! .since it is said that the eyes are a window to the soul 'into them to look shows me love'. the words in this poem just flow from line to line...great job! A 10 for sure

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