Christmas Blues Poem by Linda Ori

Christmas Blues

Rating: 4.9


The tree stands in the corner
Adorned with sparkling lights,
Beneath the tree are presents
Wrapped on many sleepless nights;
The cards have all be written
And mailed to one and all,
The cookies baked and frosted
And the cheese rolled in a ball;
I sit here and I ponder
What's the meaning of this scene?
I'm harried and I'm tired
And my wallet's out of green;
I love the Christmas music
And the parties with my friends,
The lengthy conversation
On the phone that never ends;
I took the time to try to find
That special gift so right,
The one that says 'I love you'
In hopes that it just might
Let you know how much I care -
I hope I get one, too,
Somehow it seems one sided,
'Cause the gift I get from you
Is usually something meaningless,
You never seem to know
Just what it is I really want,
Your gift is just for show;
Oh, well, it's just another year,
Another small disaster -
I bust my butt to do it all,
Each year I do it faster;
So for now I'll just relax,
Enjoy this lovely tree -
Drink some wine and rest my mind
And take the time to be
Totally in the moment,
Now all the work is done -
Christmas comes but once a year..............
Thank God! Let's have some fun!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 22 December 2006

WoooooooooosH! ...From one end of the emotional pole to the other, all in a score or so of verses....Forget the gift, whether useful or useless...its noy about you & its not about me & God knows how hippocritical, i may be by saying this...'Tis true though, Midnight...So take joy from the tree & all the late nights, because it was your good Christmas Spirit that motivated you to do all & one of it..And do enjoy, this once a year panic, because you know that you'd miss it if next year they said that Christmas was being waved! Merry Christmas, Linda! P.S.AWESOME WRITE frank

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Not a member No 4 22 December 2006

Real world emotions - they're always a mixture - very well expressed Linda. It probably brings as much sadness as joy and we all need to be true to ourselves. Thanks for a poetic but balanced take on Xmas. jim

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jack russell 05 January 2007

This trips along beautifully, Linda :) Such a pity that you seem to be taken for granted: (I can only hope that this is your muse performing; and performing perfectly it is - as usual. I hope you had a wonderful time, at least with your friend, the tree :) Best wishes. jack.

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Geoff Warden 26 December 2006

A well depict insight unto 'he blues of hustle bustle of season.....Well Done

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Raghavan Warrier 25 December 2006

Well extremes co-exist in this poem of yours and beautifully expressed too. I liked the silent participation of the tree in the poem.

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Diane Violet 22 December 2006

Linda, well expressed and yes it's time to have some fun! All the best to you and yours, Merry Christmas, Diane

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Ulrike Gerbig 22 December 2006

well, i am absolutely with you on that one! ! ! well done and well written! thanks for sharing. ulrike

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