Choices Poem by samaa Ahmed

Choices



A drop of tear falls through the heart wondering whats worse than that
People make choices of their own
And forget instantly what they've thrown
Behind..beyond and every thing they've said
Were all just a couple of words were meant to be dead

Back to the days were we were warmed with grace
Back to the days when you said you were mine and I thought it was just a phase..
So I spoke nothing.. pretended I was blind
You said nothing.. but I knew you were mine

Am writing our story though I don't know how the end would be.. its incomplete but I have faith in wt God has written 4 me

The choices we've done by God's will.. pieces of a puzzle.. we try to put together.. but there is no thrill
But am still writing.. and will be writing.. till I have the closure that is meant to be

Hope makes us high.. takes us through a journey above the sky..is it wrong to think about it or wonder why? ? ? .. did it end that way..or should it just die

I wonder why.. and how..? ? we reached this place.. is it my honesty? ? Or your cautionary race? ?

Bad news i must tell you.. you failed 'cause it were your actions which betrayed your expectation in hiding your feelings.. but I don't want them at least for now 'cause am still healing

Friday, July 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 19 July 2014

As a novice your first step into the world of poetry is quite promising, I must say! Life is a gipso puzzle.... We try to fix in the correct pieces to make it complete... This is all we can do.... how life will end up none can predict! Yet let us be hopeful! As you say; ' Hope makes us high.. takes us through a journey above the sky'! Hope for the Best! Wish you an active poetic career!

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samaa Ahmed

samaa Ahmed

khartoum, Sudan
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