Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 50,309 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Children In The Morning - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Sweet children, sweet children,
Where are you?
We are in the wash room brushing our teeth,
Aren't you too.

Sweet children, sweet children,
How do you do?
Wearing our uniforms,
Fine, thank you.

Sweet children, sweet children,
How is the break fast?
A tasty one, nice one, by grand mother,
Unlike other days, it is a contrast.

Sweet children, Sweet children,
The bus has arrived, so beautiful indeed,
Papa we are ready, see you again,
A parting kiss that's all we need.

Topic(s) of this poem: children

Poet's Notes about The Poem

A morning of my grand children

Comments about Children In The Morning by Akhtar Jawad

  • Silver Star - 3,616 Points Khalid Saifullah (9/24/2015 10:15:00 AM)

    Sweet and beautiful................................... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,215 Points Walterrean Salley (11/3/2014 12:22:00 AM)

    Children in their youth, preparing for their life's future. The loving support of parents is what they need the most. Enjoyed this very much. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,329 Points Khalida Bano Ali (11/1/2014 10:40:00 AM)

    A beautiful melody, very sweet poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 194 Points Anand Brown (4/29/2014 4:03:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. I appreciate the rhyme scheme you employ throughout the poem. Engaging, evocative and well written. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,267 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (4/21/2014 1:33:00 AM)

    a picture alluringly simple yet leaves a strong impact. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 20, 2014

Poem Edited: Monday, September 22, 2014

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