Change Poem by Louise Witwit

Change



How can people get so distant?
Time goes by
days weeks moths and even years
Still the hours pass away
Lives change, people change
Buildings fall and the flowers still grow
New buildings take a stand
The painters paint
The builders build

How can life get so complicated?
Affairs being wrote about in magazines
Innocent people being jailed
couples splitting up
when its not all good
and no repair can be found

This is not right
Its all wrong
wheres the justice and
wheres the peace.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neil Marsden 12 October 2008

You have cleverly put voice to a series of age old enigma, excellent self control and constraint throughout leaving a wonderfully diginified piece of poetry. Take care! Neil.

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Saskia Harjono 26 February 2008

life..oh..life.. so complex! it's a realistic expression on people and life.. good one

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