Change Poem by Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Interesting flow of action in this concise poem, with images of running without reason. The title could be Chaos instead of Change because change is done for a reason and with a direction.

Yet non asked why. you have powerfully depicted in short verse, the mass movement, and the senselessness of mass behaviour. thank you dear poet. tony

Change is a muse and necessity in life. We observe that all are running to grasp material happiness but all are not getting. This is entirely excellently thought provoking.10

Deep and powerful lines! Well done.

Yet non asked why. The meaninglessness of our own actions........very well portrayed. tony

A true picture on changes has been astutely painted. A beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.

A nice satire on the present state of society- everybody running after mirages.

portraing the human character in the society in which we live. a very fine poem in short verses.. tony

An amazing little Haiku! The great question mark is still unanswered! Beautiful...Thanks for sharing....10