Cause And Effect Poem by Juneil Sechico

Cause And Effect

Rating: 4.4


The quack of the cats,
The meow of the ducks;
Music to my ears,
'Cause for me you care.

The tweet of the bells,
The ring of the birds;
Realization of my dream,
'Cause I heard you called my name.

The moonlit of the phone,
The beep of the moon;
I'm flying like a kite,
'Cause you kissed me goodnight.

The star of the noon,
The sun of the night;
Flamboyance of ocean blue,
'Cause you said you love me too

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Izik Alcox 24 January 2009

very interesting write, I really enjoyed it

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Indira Babbellapati 27 January 2009

fascinating to read! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Miriam Maia Padua 28 January 2009

interesting....amusing... nice write..unique... a style of your own... by your poem...nothing is impossible..you can make the cat quack.... ....makes me smile.....

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Deborah Cromer 28 July 2009

Love does have a way of turning you upside down. This is a fun poem. You must be in a state of confusion? A little mixed up are ya now? Love will do that to ya! Deborah Cromer

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Muhammad Ali 18 April 2009

simple and poetic as much natural as i can dream! ! ! ! very lovely piece friend 10+

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Robert Howard 12 April 2009

Excellent expression of the joy and gratitude of reciprocal love.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 09 April 2009

realy nice. good concept. well framed. shan

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Shannon Wright 30 January 2009

Delightful. Sincerely delightful. Thanks for the smile :)

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Juneil Sechico

Juneil Sechico

Bayabas, Cagayan de Oro City
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