Cat In My Wardrobe Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

Cat In My Wardrobe

Rating: 5.0


The red tongued
mouth wide opened
purring in angst
meowing at night
longing for warmth
seeking a shed
finding a case.

Will it settle
filling the deserted
puzzle to exist
titilating exchange
made the presence
lively spurns
uncaring the sting.

Suddenly vanishes
crushing the passion
pangs took away
the cheer along
pamper played
spoil sport that
bear the mourn.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
April Rose Sta Cruz 26 July 2009

nice and well expressed keep it up i love it

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Luwi Habte 27 July 2009

well, this is so cool nice poem at all i like it Luwi

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Zeinab Sherif 27 July 2009

a simple & well written piece.great job.

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Surya . 28 July 2009

a beautifull poem with great imagination.nice words and line and excellent composition.voted10 surya

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Brian Jani 13 July 2014

fine use of words in this poem.i like the topic you took on and deliverd a masterpiece

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Nikunj Sharma 08 September 2009

Nice, cute, sweet and stimulating....keeps the reade on his toes

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Indira Babbellapati 28 August 2009

physicality expressed through an apt metaphor...

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Ted M 28 July 2009

Nice experience for the Cat in the cupboard. Good flow.10+++

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 July 2009

another fine artwork! truely poetic expressions that the cat longing for warmth! 10+

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