Marites C. Cayetano

Freshman - 675 Points (Philippines)

Castle Of Dream - Poem by Marites C. Cayetano

Have you been there
in the castle of dream?

I've been there
in the castle of dream.

There were many people
of different colors,
of different clothes,
of different language,
in one long table
enjoying different foods
exchanging smiles
with pure gentle love
glowing in their eyes.

In the castle of dream,
I've been there...
just......behind the walls.

Comments about Castle Of Dream by Marites C. Cayetano

  • Silver Star - 3,649 Points Rajendran Muthiah (2/16/2012 9:24:00 AM)

    Being a secular castle, it will live long. Terror can't enter as they don't dream and think. Well Done! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,649 Points Rajendran Muthiah (2/16/2012 9:22:00 AM)

    A secular castle will live long; won't crumble. A nice piece! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,115 Points Dave Walker (2/16/2012 9:19:00 AM)

    A really great poem, enjoyed reading it.
    A great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 16, 2012

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