Castle Of Dream Poem by Marites C. Cayetano

Castle Of Dream

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Have you been there
in the castle of dream?

I've been there
in the castle of dream.

There were many people
of different colors,
of different clothes,
of different language,
in one long table
enjoying different foods
exchanging smiles
with pure gentle love
glowing in their eyes.

In the castle of dream,
I've been there...
just......behind the walls.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajendran Muthiah 16 February 2012

Being a secular castle, it will live long. Terror can't enter as they don't dream and think. Well Done!

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Rajendran Muthiah 16 February 2012

A secular castle will live long; won't crumble. A nice piece!

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Dave Walker 16 February 2012

A really great poem, enjoyed reading it. A great write.

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