Marites C. Cayetano

Freshman - 518 Points (Philippines)

Don'T Walk Too Fast - Poem by Marites C. Cayetano

Don't walk too fast
'cause I might be left behind
don't walk too slow either
'cause you might be left behind.

We are not in a race
I am not your contender...

So don't walk too fast
as if wanting to defeat me
and don't walk too slow either
as if wanting me to win.

Don't walk too fast
or to slow
but let's walk together
....side by side.


Comments about Don'T Walk Too Fast by Marites C. Cayetano

  • Rookie Eindaray Kyaw (8/22/2012 11:41:00 PM)

    It's meaningful and enjoyable! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 1 Points Carsten Thomsen (8/18/2012 10:15:00 AM)

    Inspired by this quote I wonder..

    Don't walk in front of me, I may not follow; Don't walk behind me, I may not lead;
    Walk beside me, and just be my friend.

    Francis Quareles

    Nice work though... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rickydean26@gmail.com Goolsby (8/18/2012 9:06:00 AM)

    I like This one. Thanks for sharing. And its very true! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alon Dy (8/18/2012 8:52:00 AM)

    nice one. good poem with beautiful meanings. feel free to comment my poems as well.thank you (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 18, 2012



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