Carnival Of Rust Poem by Divya Garg

Carnival Of Rust

Rating: 4.8


Is it the Carnival of Rust?
Or the celebration of broken trust
Has the Wheel of Fortune still turning
Or the scheduled rounds are concluded

Is this the thud of gust?
Or the whoosh of explosion
Has the sun yet to shine
Or the rain still crying

Is this the fête of trounce
Or the festivity of whine
Has the dream yet to prolong
Or the Nightmare has affirmed conquest

Is it the Carnival of Rust?
Or the matter of broken trust

Thursday, April 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: contemplative,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hasan Maruf 27 April 2017

Awesome....Encapsulating a beautiful thought

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Hasan Maruf 28 April 2017

Dear I am a new here can you help me getting new readers to boost up my ratings in the site...I seek suggestion, advice, encouragement as well as specific criticism to improve my writing/poem. Thanks

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Divya Garg 28 April 2017

Thank you Hasan :)

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Siddartha Montik 27 April 2017

Wonderful.. I liked it! ! beautifully articulated verses.. Keep it Up Poet! ! 10++

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Divya Garg 27 April 2017

Thanks for the encouraging words, am glad you liked it.

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