Care Me Till The End...Will You? ... Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

Care Me Till The End...Will You? ...

Rating: 5.0


staying alone
can you come and fill my soul
beside me....

walking alone
can you come and hold my hand
to make my path new....

smiling alone
with thoughts like your smiling too
for my silly jokes....

crying alone
can you come and wipe my tears
like a morning wipes a dew....

eating alone
with a plate before me for sure
thinking your dining with me too....

singing alone
lying on the field of flowers
for the tone you play in my heart....

sleeping calm
with dreams where none can be seen
guess it can be fixed by you....

Drowned Iam
in the river of love
with belief, you will teach me to swim....

In real
Iam a baby for now
care me till the end...will you? ...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Winnie Angel 28 July 2009

Wow! , , , , , , , Its Superb! .....beautiful way of saying, presenting andd making the one to feel for your love........someday the one will surely care for you beyond your imagination till the end......Winnie

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Tess Macapagal 21 July 2009

Care me till the end.... will you? ? ? Yes, dear my sweet child bastine.... till the end of my time, , , you are getting matured my sweet child, , , all words are meaningful, , , so lucky the one who cares you for sure hahahhahah....

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Miriam Maia Padua 20 July 2009

wow..another sweet, lovely and passionate write.. flowing with love and hopes...and longing... a very sweet plea for care...and love.. very convincing write.. the thoughts are vividly expressed through your sweet words... simply perfect.. 10+++++ my friend lovelots, Maia

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