Gothic Love......(A Restless Soul....) Poem by Sebastine Humaemo

Gothic Love......(A Restless Soul....)

Rating: 5.0


When everyone in this world gone to sleep
she is the only soul who awaken's from her bed
As she walks the lonely road
her dark shadow seen crawling on the wall
and it follows her, along with the dark cloud

soon, when she hit the lonely bench at the road end
she stops for a while, and her eyes glazed the bench
under the moon light, her fingers started dancing in the air
and it seemed, she touches someone, who's sitting there with love and care

suddenly with tears rolling down she started to run
and gothic voice filled the place as if someone mourns
she was seen restless until she reaches the hill top
where she breakdown and cries aloud deep from her heart
thats the place where she and her loved one ended their life
and she dosn't know why, his (her loved one) soul alone still hides

As there is none to hear her love song
all night she keeps on.... walking......on and on
with no one to answer her cries, she walks back to her burial place
sitting on the cemetery, she keeps admiring her lover's soul less grave

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reshma Ramesh 12 December 2008

sad and again a good ending...............well penned

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C T Heart 12 December 2008

Beautiful poetic description of gothic love.....a 10/10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 12 December 2008

Rest in piece my soul............in you.Good writes Sebastian.

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Thad Wilk 12 December 2008

Ahh melancholy and sweet Sebastine! Love it, a wonderful poem an story - of love! Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad

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*Trusting You* 13 December 2008

wow... I dont even know what to say, this is sooo good I love it! ! ! I am going to add it to my favs. the beginning the ending.... just wow... you did a Fantastic job with this. Becca

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Miriam Maia Padua 18 May 2009

so touching...this is heart-quenching... very expressive..the thoughts are impressive ...the lines flows smoothly...bringing the pain and the hollowness into my heart... really...really sad.... 10+++ for this...

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Winnie Angel 11 January 2009

a heart touching poem.....expressing the genuine love and her helpless plight..fighting betwn her wishes and impossibility! ! ! ....

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Naidz Ladia 11 January 2009

so sad....so sad....whatta wonderful love they had...but is it justfiable? speechless on ths poem of urs sweet tine..

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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 16 December 2008

a sentimental love poem..filled with unfolded mysteries...thanks for this gothic love poem!

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brittany 15 December 2008

this is very very good i almost found myself tearing up.......... thanks for sharing! brittany

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