Captain Oliver Poem by Edmund V. Strolis

Captain Oliver



Oliver felt the ground around him, while rolling to his hands and knees
One moment he was leaping and whistling along the valley floor
The next he had fallen within a gaping mouth hidden by brush and brier
Oliver a ginger headed boy was fueled by the winds of imagination and adventure
The scamp's fantasy and reality were one and the same, king, philosopher and liar

This land below the valley draped in red vines, ruby toadstools and crimson grass
So deep that it shared the hot roof floor with the main chamber of Hades heart itself
Oliver grinned never worried, he stood with hands on hips and whistled once again
He heard his dear granny saying that if you laugh at fear you can never be beaten
So as the air darkened blood red he lifted his head, he was ready for the fun to begin

He would tell this story and a thousand others, of places, faces and daring deeds
He was all motion and mayhem, howling laughter, a sun burnt freckled toothy grin
He laughed at the pasty boys with their heads and souls stolen by cold screens
He could not pretend to care one bit for their sterile, wired, and carpeted world
He craved the rush of a screaming storm, in the mast of a tree, within a sail of green

Captain Oliver
Monday, May 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: adventure,imagination,independence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 04 May 2016

You understand the heart of a boy, Edmund! So much so that I wonder if that boy still lives large in your writer's heart from where he fuels your imagination! Fantastic closing lines- -it is not easy to find great closures but this is dang near perfection on earth- - - - ] He could not pretend to care one bit for their sterile, wired, and carpeted world He craved the rush of a screaming storm, in the mast of a tree, within a sail of green

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Edmund Strolis 08 May 2016

You really are too kind Susan. I am well aware of my good fortune and feel sorry for these new plugged in children and adults.As soon as my need to make a living ends I will cut this techno-tether. No computer. A home phone and a P.O.Box will do just fine. People may see that as moving away from life when just the opposite is true. No distractions, no noise to filter, pure nature and experience. The marrow of life that Thoreau spoke of...........HAPPY THOUGHTS- Susan Williams!

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