Carpe Diem Poem by Edmund V. Strolis

Carpe Diem

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Come stroll with me to the top of Blue Jay hill
Escort me upon this adventurous journey now
We will waltz on the platform of that ancient mill
Free yourself from the city, I can show you how

I will name a creek and a flower or two just for you
This will be our enchanted land, if only for a day
Rule one in this land is to do as you wish to do
Rule two in the kingdom is to cast your cares away

That burden that you carry simply must be tossed
The weight of pain and regret is too heavy here
We will find ourselves by deliberately getting lost
Use a Sycamore branch to joust away your fears

Greet your first sunrise through your watering eyes
Your warming cheeks caressed by those welcoming rays
Surrender to your passions and you will be surprised
The time is now and not just 'one of these days'.

Carpe Diem
Wednesday, February 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Glen Kappy 04 June 2017

hey, edmund! i decided to pick a poem from the middle of your postings and chose this one. i like the invitation in it and, most particularly, the use of to joust. it summons chivalrous times and ads the connotation of gentleness to the invitation. with some similarities, you might like my poem snail mornings, the only one i've written with an explicit invitation. -glen

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Margaret O Driscoll 12 April 2016

Wonderful work, 'we will find ourselves by deliberately getting lost'... 'the time is now'....wonderful

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Sarah Persson 17 February 2016

This poem shows just how hard love can be when you see how the hurt of the lover can be an obstacle. A very touching poem

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