Candles Of My Life Poem by william greer

Candles Of My Life

Rating: 3.5


Idont want to blew out these candles,
because i dont want another year to pass,
another year of trouble and strife,
one more just like the last.

Count each day of sadness, of lonliness of feeling blue,
365x24 hours daily missing you,
every single second remembering what ive lost,
another year another reason to sit and count the cost.

All my fault, im to blame but i cant turn back time,
no God wont give me one more chance to try to make you mine,
so no ill not blew out these candles, let them burn out slow,
for at their end ill realize its time for me to go.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fay Slimm 27 August 2008

A well thought through piece William. Also it has good heart appeal to any reader.

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Vallerie Lobell 10 October 2006

I have many days like this..hope you find something to look forward to...enjoy your birthday...the more you have the longer you live.... good poem..best wishes and Happy Birthday...Vallerie...

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